He walked into the packed ball room, looking as suave as ever, doing every bit of justice to his sharply cut immaculate black tuxedo that emanated a subtle glint of luxury, as did the sharp whiff of his musky masculine scent.
“Yes! Looks like today is my day…he’s finally going to ask me…” thought the sneering Emma twirling a golden strand that had escaped her carefully coiffured hairdo, as she vainly admired the reflection of her perfect makeup in the glittering swirl of the red wine in the gleaming goblet she sipped it from.
that was like a fairy-tale romance! sometime simplicity steals away all the limelight 🙂
Yes Ankita…simplicity has a mystical charm of its own 🙂
Wow! That was so beautiful, Vinodini 🙂
Thank you Athira! I love 'Wows' 😉
Wow! Very well written. I can see the scene.
Thank you for your kind appreciation, Amy.
A fairytale romance! Great descriptions. Lovely read, Vinodini 🙂
Yes Beloo…the prompt 'dazzle' just got the sucker for romance in me to write this 😉
You always leave me with such boosting comments – thanks 🙂
Nicely written! 🙂
Thanks Marya!
Beautifully written, really enjoyed x
Glad you liked it Rachel. Sweet of you to drop by. Do keep visiting.
Would love to read more about angels and other spiritual topics that you write about.
More than the story I adored the way you wrote it. You diction and setting is absolutely brilliant.
Wow that's such a generous dose of compliment Rajlakshmi! I'm smiling 🙂
Well woven. I find writing five sentence fictions very difficult. You have added so much narration in so few lines. Well done 🙂
Thanks Jyotsna. I agree, five sentence fictions are quite challenging but I've figured out that it sometimes does wonders to the content by forcing us to trim off unnecessary garnishing.
Your narration is great. Too good.
Thank you black beauty. I'm glad you like it. Welcome to my blog 🙂
This passage is really jam packed with stimulating visuals. Nice!
Thank you Stephanie. I'm glad I could create that imagery for you.
A nice little love story..
Thanks Jayanta.
aaaha 🙂
Perfect !
The perfect love story :):)
I could almost see the lone tear trickling down her cheeks !:)
Thank you Sreeja! Yeah, the tear almost felt like a jewel to me when I read it after I wrote it 🙂
I so liked your tale..I am a sucker for romance…Lovely.
Thanks Preethi! Me too…I'm one too. I'm happy you liked it 🙂
aww.. the fairy tale romance… prince in shining Armour. cute
Tina from The Sunny Side of Life
Thanks Tina 🙂