She sucked in her breath, unflinchingly watching the eyes move around in her house. The eyes tip-toed softy across the living room, pausing now and then to check if all was clear and there was nothing to fear.
They scampered warily and cautiously into the kitchen one after another, as he pulled open the door to sharply cut the darkness with a sharp flood of light and the gust of icy chill of the refrigerator on his chubby cheeks, as he eyed his target greedily.
The ballsy eyes could have made away with the loot this time, but alas…as luck would have it, his Mum pulled little Raghu’s ear hard, catching him red-handed, even before he dared to sink his clean minty, freshly brushed teeth into a sinfully creamy slice of the rich chocolate gateau….ouch!
Well can you blame the kid: that looks sinfully delicious! It looks and smells so real, I am even tempted! 😉 (By the way, I don't think I've ever raided my parents' fridge but I know I have my own, many times! hahaha 😉 <3)
You've been a good child Elly. I've had my share of raiding the refrigerator as a child 😉
He needs to be taught how not to get caught! 😉 Now you've made my mouth water, Vinodini.
Yes Corinne, he sure needs to be taught. I myself was craving for a slice of that when I added it to the post 😉
The kid was indeed fearless. Alas his temptation got him caught.
Well written. 🙂
Thanks Lancelot. Unfortunately, no brownie points for him for being fearless 🙂
Ouch.. Oh oh.. Bad time to get caught 😛
He he yes Jyotsna, indeed bad timing.
Who could blame him. When such a piece of chocolate heaven is right there at home, who can resist? Has your signature style, Vinodini 🙂
Thank you Aathira. I agree, that's quite a temptation 🙂
Sometimes for these FSF I find myself digging way to deep, I love reading more whimsical approaches.
I hope this falls in the whimsical category rlyonsii. I agree FSF does challenge your grey cells.
Hah! Loved the suspense and the ending was fantastic!
Thanks Freya. Glad you liked it!
Poor boy. Enjoyed reading your story. 🙂
Thank you Shail. Good to see you here 🙂
Poor kid, someone needs to tell him how to do it right 😛 Nice take on the prompt.
Thank you Keirthana. He sure needs lessons 🙂
Poor kid… Fantastic read. I love the way you write ..
Thank you Vinitha. Welcome to my blog.
How do you imagine things like this.Born for it huh?salute mam.
Thank you Prasanth. I guess its my twisted mind that brings it out 😉
Its good for a writer.
I guess so Prasanth 🙂