“Who do you think?” it asked
“How would I know?” she exclaimed a tad petulantly, not in a mood for a guessing game. “So, now tell me who you are,” she demanded.
“C,” it said.
“C as in, C for Creep? she questioned it cheekily.
“Well yes, that’s what you are – a creep, to creep on me on stealth like that!” she retorted haughtily.
“Can’t help it…you guys never realize that I exist till the time I creep onto you when you’re least expecting it!”
It replied calmly, “You see…I’m C for Conscience.”
Oh man this was brilliant. MY mind is judging me right nw
He he he thanks Red! I hope your mind's been good to you 😉
Brilliant Vinodini 🙂
-Shanx
Thanks Shanx! Finally there's a name I can refer to you with instead of embark, which sounded, kind of funny.
Can I THIRD the two comments above? Absolutely BRILLIANT! Loved it. I can just envision some people slapping at this creeping insect, trying to rid themselves of it!
Divine, dear Vinodini! HUGS <3
Thank you Judy! Yeah, a lot of people can't accept their conscience. I respect the ones who do.
as always another brilliant piece of writing 🙂
Thanks Lisa! Great to see you here after long.
Wow! Brilliant piece vinodini
Thanks Nisha 🙂
Great thought!!
Nice writeup!!
Word 'Creep' resonating in my mind now 😀
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Thank you Anirudh! Welcome to my blog. Hope it wasn't too creepy a thought 😉
Great! Thanks for sharing!
Thanks Laurel!
Beautiful Vinodini.. Esp the last line, fantastic 🙂
Thank you Vinay! Glad to see you here after long.
Ah.. Niceeee.. Good one Vinodini 🙂
Thanks Jyotsna. Glad you like it!
This is just wow! Very thoughtful:)
I love wows Anu 😉 Thank you so much!
Oh God this was brilliant..Infact even more than that!
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Hey thanks Nabanita 🙂 I'm truly flattered 😉
Beautifully done, Vinodini 🙂
Thank you Shailaja 🙂
wow.. that was awesome! Superbly written and very insightful
Thanks Roshan. Glad it was insightful 🙂
Wow this was a brilliant piece of writing!!
Thanks Aditi!
Haha an absolutely delightful one, Vinodini:)
Hey thanks Vishal!
It was a nice piece of writing…liked it a lot…
Thank you Shellymona. Great to see you here.
True to the word, happens for everyone 🙂
Yes Keirthana. Happens to the best of us.
now that's a brilliant way you write about conscience. Very well written 😀
Thanks Rajlakshmi. Glad you like it 🙂
This is wonderfully written, Vinodini. Powerful message conveyed so simply and calmly. Loved it!
Thank you Beloo. I'm happy the message came through effectively.
As usual, an unsuspecting person, twist/turn of events. Love it as usual AND brilliant as usual! Told you, you are a "brilliant" writer Vinodin: the comments above attest to that! Now will you believe me?! 😉 <3
Thanks Elly! Yeah, you always reaffirmed on my belief in myself. I'm truly humbled 🙂
So insightful, this is. Very true, the worst judge is our own mind ! 🙂
Yeah Sreeja…does put you in a spot, doesn't it?